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#50 Precious Words 2022 BALLOON AND BOY

  • Writer: Andrew Hacket
    Andrew Hacket
  • Mar 4, 2022
  • 1 min read

It's time again for one of my favorite contests of the year, Vivian Kirkfield's #50 Precious Words. With a word limit of (you guessed it!) just 50 words, this contest is equal parts challenge and fun. The teeny-tiny word limit forces precise word choice and stretches our ability to tell a complete narrative succinctly.


So without further ado, here is my 2022 entry coming in at exactly 50 words, BALLOON AND BOY.




BALLOON AND BOY (50 words)

By Andrew Hacket



Boy was kind, but Balloon longed to fly.

So he slipped through Boy’s grasp.

Didn’t look back.


He soared and explored.

Had adventures galore!


Until…


Thunder and lightning.

Freedom was frightening.


Alone.

Isolated.

Balloon sank, deflated.


Then...


Footsteps.

A gasp.

Boy had come back.


Both filled with love once more.



 
 
 

5 Kommentare


PCatherinejWalterj
21. Apr.

The Royal Oak Concept Flying Tourbillon GMT is about as practical a watch as you are going to find in the RO Concept line. Granted, there is very little about a tourbillon-equipped wristwatch link that screams practicality, but this one offers an link extremely long power reserve matched with what I think is the most useful of all complications, the link GMT.

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PCatherinejWalterj
19. Apr.

For those looking for diver-like SKX specs you'll need to look elsewhere. link The SSK isn't equipped with a link screw-down crown and is only water-resistant to 100m, which is 100m less than the SKX. Nonetheless, I think fans of SKX diver who want that same look, along with GMT functionality, link will be plenty happy with this one. It doesn't bother me in the least, since SSK isn't meant to be a diver.

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HPetravGelseyv
21. März

Eric Ku, consummate collector, occasional Hodinkee contributor, and founder of online watch auction platform Loupe This, link has a fairly straightforward definition of the term that I think does the job well. "You don't have to be a watch person to want one of these link watches anymore," he says. "It Metaverse Fitness could be anybody's watch."

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buschman.deb
buschman.deb
09. März 2022

I love this. Great story Andrew.

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Carlisle Malone
Carlisle Malone
05. März 2022

This is beautiful, my friend!!!!

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